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The pounding starts to stop
My worlds on the clock
Can bareley hear a sound
With you all around
I'll ask you just before
I slip and fall from the floor
*Did you, rip me from this world, and
Throw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
Don't close my eyes*
Now laying in the black
Can't deny the fact
The worms are my only friends here
But its not the worms I fear
It's the people up above
Who left me down below
When push comes to shove
Was everything for show
*They ripped me from this world, and
Threw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
They sewed my eyes*
Tears from a bottle
Mind on full throttle
Secrets I can keep
Only when I'm asleep
Paint me so pretty
For your false pity
Laying so still
The silence starts to build
One jolt, one scream, one break in the chain
One beat, the screen! Now soak up the stain
*I'll rip you from your world, and
Throw you in the ground, and
Still alive, I'll stand
Dont close my eyes
Because you
You ripped me from this world, and
Threw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
You sewed my eyes
I'll rip you from your world, and
Throw you in the ground, and
Still alive, I'll stand
Dont close my eyes*
My worlds on the clock
Can bareley hear a sound
With you all around
I'll ask you just before
I slip and fall from the floor
*Did you, rip me from this world, and
Throw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
Don't close my eyes*
Now laying in the black
Can't deny the fact
The worms are my only friends here
But its not the worms I fear
It's the people up above
Who left me down below
When push comes to shove
Was everything for show
*They ripped me from this world, and
Threw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
They sewed my eyes*
Tears from a bottle
Mind on full throttle
Secrets I can keep
Only when I'm asleep
Paint me so pretty
For your false pity
Laying so still
The silence starts to build
One jolt, one scream, one break in the chain
One beat, the screen! Now soak up the stain
*I'll rip you from your world, and
Throw you in the ground, and
Still alive, I'll stand
Dont close my eyes
Because you
You ripped me from this world, and
Threw me in the ground, and
Put the rose in my hand
You sewed my eyes
I'll rip you from your world, and
Throw you in the ground, and
Still alive, I'll stand
Dont close my eyes*
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Duh, right? It's the only way I know to actually write.
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-Matt Hughes
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Two things
1°.- Is great to read your songs again.
2° By any chanse are ya fan of Tim Burton?
Great song as always. I like it a lot.
1°.- Is great to read your songs again.
2° By any chanse are ya fan of Tim Burton?
Great song as always. I like it a lot.